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A14. Modul de formare: Intarirea capacitatii de publicare a membrilor GT

Conf. dr. ing. Izabela-Cristina Stancu

16.07.2015 (15:00-19:00) Local Polizu, corp A

4. Provocari si atitudini in activitatea de publicare – partea II

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Elemente parcurse

* De parcurs | gestionat impreuna cu colectivul de autori

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Obiective:

• Pregatirea corecta a unui manuscris stiintific

• Elemente cheie

• Cum evitam greseli commune?

• Cum:

• Inserare elemente grafice: figuri, numarul figurii, legenda

• Inserare tabele: tabel, numar, legenda

• …

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Manuscris publicat | citit | citat

Autorul cercetarii si mesajului stiintific

Recenzor | editor

Public cititor

Atitudini in activitatea de publicare

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Obiectivul principal – extindea cunoasterii intr-un domeniu

http://pubs.acs.org/paragonplus/submission/acs_manuscript_submission_quickguide.pdf

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III. Pregatirea manuscrisului

Consultare instructiuni pentru autori revista selectata

Articole similare recente din revista vizata

Elaborare structura:

•Titlu

•Autori

•Rezumat

•Cuvinte cheie

•Introducere

•Materiale si metode

•Rezultate si discutii

•Concluzii

•Acknowledgments

•Referinte bibliografice

•Material suplimentar

Redactare si verificare cu autorii

Trimitere catre editor

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Obiective vizate, viziune tripla:

Autorul: evaluare corecta, publicare rapida, vizibilitate

Editorul:

Calitate, impact, vizibilitate larga

Cititorul: lucrari usor de parcurs, bine structurate,

metodologie clara, rezultate clare, analiza critica

Exemplu de mesaj editorial

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Calitatea unui manuscris stiintific

este factorul decisiv pentru

succesul acesteia.

Salvati timp pretios pregatind

riguros manuscrisul.

• Claritatea mesajului

• Originalitatea si impactul mesajului

• Structura si stil corespunzator revistei

American Chemical Society:

“A well composed paper clearly

stands out, gaining the prompt

attention of editors, reviewers,

and readers.”

Tendinte:

http://www.bowlinginspain.com/ReportWriting/ReportWriting.htm

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Intrebari cheie:

• Care sunt realizarile

importante?

• Ce aduce acest studiu in

plus / diferit ?

• Unicitate?

• Cat de diferit? Alta

compozitie? Alt material?

Alta tehnica? O imbunatatire

semnificativa a unui

comportament / parametru?


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Puterea titlului

– important pentru atragerea audientei; Un titlu bun asigura vizibilitate.

Un titlu eficient:

1. Puternic - Identifica problematica centrala a lucrarii

2. Insumeaza rezultatele obtinute

3. Elimina ambiguitatea, este specific si complet, se adreseaza unui public tinta

4. Este cat de scurt se poate

5. Este interesant. Suscita interesul cititorilor

6. Elementele mentionate sunt sustinute de continutul manuscrisului

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Toate elementele mentionate in titlu sunt sustinute de continutul

manuscrisului

• Tendinta de a enunta in titlu un element | concept modern pentru a atrage

atentia – Doar daca manuscrisul, prin continutul sau sustine acea

mentiune.

Exemplu: manuscrisul Ink Step Adaptability and Reliability of Maleimide-functionalized UV-curable

Optically Clear Adhesives

How about the “maleimide-functionalization”? It is referred to only in the title. Therefore this study,

despite being interesting, cannot be fully understood and should be re-written.

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Analizati

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Exemple de titluri:

Revista:

1) Biomechanics and Modeling in Mechanobiology • Effects of aortic irregularities on blood flow

• Growth and remodelling for profound circular wounds in skin

• Sutured tendon repair; a multi-scale finite element model

2) Journal of Nanoparticle Research •Colloidal stability of polymeric nanoparticles in biological fluids

•Self-assembled silver nanoparticles monolayers on mica-AFM, SEM, and

electrokinetic characteristics

•Growth of gold flowers on polyacrylonitrile fibers

•Microfluidic preparation of polymer nanospheres

3) Acta Biomaterialia • Hydrogels in calcium phosphate moldable and injectable bone substitutes: Sticky

excipients or advanced 3-D carriers?

• An amphiphilic degradable polymer/hydroxyapatite composite with enhanced

handling characteristics promotes osteogenic gene expression in bone marrow stromal

cells

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De evitat in elaborarea titlului

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cuvintele inutile, care nu

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adjectivele in exces

NU dublati cuvintele cheie!


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Exercitiu: Analizati si comentati urmatoarele variante:

v1. Electrospun fish gelatin fibrous scaffolds with improved bio-interactions

due to carboxylated nanodiamond loading

v2. Electrospun fish gelatin-nanodiamond fibrous mats as promissing

scaffolds for bone regeneration

v3. Synthesis and characterization of electrospun fish gelatin-nanodiamond

fibrous scaffolds

v4. Design, synthesis and investigation of electrospun gelatin-nanodiamond

fibrous scaffolds

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Autorii si cuvinte cheie UN

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• asigura vizibilitatea lucrarii; sunt identificate - motoare de cautare

• general descriptive + particularitati; eventual de verificat cuvinte cheie in acea

revista, pentru lucrari similare

• unele reviste au lista de cuvinte cheie


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Rezumatul

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Nanotechnology and biomimicry represent appealing yet underexploited approaches to develop scaffolds

with ECM-inspired characteristics for tissue engineering. Here we investigated the capacity of a

combination of elements to trigger enhanced bio-interactions with bone regeneration potential: COOH-

functionalized nanodiamond particles (COOH-NDPs) were loaded for the first time into electrospun fish

gelatin fibers generating nanocomposite scaffolds with interconnected porosity. When compared to control

fish gelatin fibers, no significant modification of the mineralization capacity in acellular simulated body fluid

was evidenced by micro-structural and spectroscopic investigations, for fibers with COOH-NDPs between

0.25% and 1%. Following Ca/P alternate incubation, nano-apatite crystals were preferentially developed

and firmly adhered in proximity of COOH-NDPs, as proven by transmission electron microscopy. Significant

mineralization occurred in culture media in the presence of MG63 cells and was directly stimulated by the

nanoparticles. Altogether, these findings emphasize the ability of NDPs to enhance, when immobilized in

gelatin fibers and exposed to specific media, the formation of apatite. It was also noticed that the number of

adherent MG63 cells, their morphology, spreading and growth were improved by increasing the amount of

NDPs in the fibers (fluorescence and scanning electron microscopy). This work successfully proves the

potential of such nanocomposite fibers to find applications in bone regeneration.

Stancu et al., to be submitted 2015

Exercitiu: Analizati si comentati:

RSC Advances - is an international, peer-reviewed journal covering all of the chemical sciences, including multidisciplinary and

emerging areas. The criteria for publication are that the work must be high quality, well conducted and add to the development of

the field. Articles submitted to the journal are evaluated by international referees for the overall quality and accuracy of the science

presented.

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Manuscrisul

Introducere

Materiale si metode / Experimental

Rezultate si discutii

Concluzii

Acknowledgments

Referinte bibliografice

Material suplimentar

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Introducere

Trasare context + background fara a fi o lectie de istorie

Punctarea problematicii.

Motivarea proiectului

Referire la lucrari relevante, provocari identificate

Ipoteze, intrebari stiintifice adresate

Sustinute cu referinte bibliografice relevante

Prezentarea pe scurt a design-ului a experimentului.

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Materiale si metode

detalierea experimentului pentru a permite intelegerea concluziilor si a asigura

reproductibilitate

folositi Past Tense si evitati persoana I (recent unele reviste accepta)

identificati materialele

prezentati metodele cheie mentionand conditiile utilizate; daca sunt metode

cunoscute faceti trimiterea la lucrari anterioare si punctati doar modificarea

structurati logic prezentarea

mentionati metodele de investigare, frecventa, conditiile

prezentati echipamentele, modul de analiza, pregatirea probelor pentru analiza…

precizati aspecte de etica necesare (aprobarea comitetelor de etica, standarde in

vigoare ….)

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Utilizati reprezentari schematice daca se impune

Nu comunicati, in aceasta sectiune, rezultate !

- Uneori exista tendinta de a prezenta o sinteza si de a face un comentariu

asupra produsului: S-a obtinut o membrana alba si subtire….; Au rezultat

microparticule sferoidale ….

- Aceste aspecte se comunica in sectiunea REZULTATE

Exemplu: The experimental section contains results that should be included in the

section Results. See for instance 2.2.1. UV-curing behavior by FT-IR, where, in addition to

describing the methos and the device, the authors present results: “as shown in Fig. 5”.

Materiale si metode

[recenzie manuscris respins]

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• Prezentati pe larg rezultate obtinute; stil logic, clar.

• Important: Daca cele doua sectiuni sunt unite, dupa raportarea rezultatelor

trebuie sa interpretati si sa discutati rezultatele (comentati in raport cu

nivelul domeniului, alte studii, perspective deschise, ipoteze confirmate).

Daca sectiunea Discutii este prezentata separat, atunci pastrati

interpretarea si comentarea datelor pentru acea rubrica a lucrarii.

• Aici demonstrati utilitatea, importanta datelor obtinute, subliniati noutatea

• Utilizati elemente grafice care sustin cele spuse.

• Evitati dublarea informatiei. Un grafic nu trebuie sa reia ceea ce tocmai am

mentionat intr-un tabel.

• Asigurati-va ca prin ce prezentati sustineti concluziile studiului.

• Nu uitati aspecte importante, eliminati aspecte inutile.

Rezultate si Discutii

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Graficele nu reiau informatia din tabele ci

doar o completeaza

Mesaj clar, precis, usor de inteles, legenda

clara.

Elemente grafice

Scheme Figuri Grafice Tabele

Elemente grafice

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In acord cu ghidul pentru autori;

Utilizati elemente grafice clare, ce pot fi citite. Prelucrati formal informatia fara alterarea

continutului. Asigurati-va ca cititorul are acces la intreaga informatie: scale, unitati de

masura, fonturi potrivite, notite…


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Elementele grafice - Nu dubleaza informatia din text ci o completeaza, o sustin.

- Legenda: clara, descriptiva atat cat sa transmita informatie cheie si fara a fi

nevoie de toate detaliile din text

- numerotare

- Se comenteaza in text. Nu se folosesc elemente grafice fara a face referire la ele

in corpul manuscrisului.

- Dovedesc cauzalitate, sustin rezultatele si concluziile.

- In unele grafice se folosesc trend lines intre punctele experimentale numai pentru

a ghida vizual cititorul.

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• Figuri l Scheme

Sample Gelatin / Alginate

(wt/wt)

Diameter, m

A 2/1 125

B 4/1 301

C 5/1 222

D 7/1 456

E 9/1 896

Table i. Characteristics of the studied hydrogel particles

Fig ii. Babele, Romania

2 componente formeaza elemental grafic: Ilustratia + legenda

• Tabele

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* De evitat prezentarea unor date care ridica intrebari asupra reproductibilitatii.

Orice element grafic trebuie sa contina informatie relevanta, care sustine |

demonstreaza cele afirmate in articol.

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Elementele grafice – de obicei inainte de finalul paragrafului in care sunt

comentate prima data.

Reguli generale:

• Legenda – sub figura

• Numarul – numere

arabe, in ordinea

aparitiei in text.

spatiu

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Fig. 2. The skeleton in the rocking chair - the Skeletons exhibition at the Australian Museum.

[Photographer: Carl Bento Rights: © Australian Museum

http://australianmuseum.net.au/image/Skeleton-in-rocking-chair/ ]

Fig. 1. Micro-CT of trabecular bone – mouse

[kindly provided by Pr D. CHAPPARD*, for teaching aims]

Daca figurile sunt preluate din alte lucrari, se mentioneaza acest lucru

*GEROM: Research Group on Bone Remodeling and bioMaterials, University Angers, France

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Grafice

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Grafice

Figura neclara, dubleaza tabelul.

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Exemplu reprezentare schematica.

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Exemplu figuri

complexe

• Montajele de

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• Un inset trebuie sa

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Exemplu neconcordanta intre text si figura – greseala uriasa intr-un manuscris

[recenzie manuscris respins]

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Exemplu figura simpla

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Nu comunicati, in aceasta sectiune, rezultate !

-Uneori exista tendinta de a prezenta o sinteza si de a face un

comentariu asupra produsului: S-a obtinut o membrana alba si

subtire….; Au rezultat microparticule sferoidale ….

- Aceste aspecte se comunica in sectiunea REZULTATE

Utilizati reprezentari schematice daca se impune

Concluzii

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TOC grafics

- reprezentarea grafica a temei lucrarii stiintifice

- mesaj grafic

- captarea atentiei / intereselui cititorilor

Soft Matter, 2015, DOI: 10.1039/C5SM00973A

Soft Matter, 2015, DOI: 10.1039/C5SM00865D

Soft Matter, 2015, Advance Article

DOI: 10.1039/C5SM00508F

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UNDERSTANDING THE PUBLISHING PROCESS, How to publish in scholarly

journals,

http://www.elsevier.com/__data/assets/pdf_file/0003/91173/Brochure_UPP_April

2015.pdf

QUICK GUIDE TO MANUSCRIPT SUBMISSION FOR ACS JOURNALS,

http://pubs.acs.org/paragonplus/submission/acs_manuscript_submission_quickg

uide.pdf

How to Make Your Next Paper Scientifically Effective, J. Phys. Chem.

Lett., 2013, 4 (9), pp 1578–1581, DOI: 10.1021/jz4006916

Surse de informare:





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